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authorKalpa Welivitigoda <callkalpa@gmail.com>2013-08-10 16:04:03 (GMT)
committer Kalpa Welivitigoda <callkalpa@gmail.com>2013-08-10 16:04:03 (GMT)
commitadf484e6a3192602e2c2991bc3325fbeb881e892 (patch)
tree31ee51b52a571a68a9c7b8391a1acdbe454aefb9
parent9af412f747ad892ae7a7e271196bb8e6627bf5bb (diff)
modified so as to give a better meaning
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diff --git a/po/about.pot b/po/about.pot
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@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ msgid ""
msgstr ""
"Project-Id-Version: Sugar 0.94\n"
"Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: \n"
-"POT-Creation-Date: 2013-08-10 19:46\n"
+"POT-Creation-Date: 2013-08-10 21:31\n"
"PO-Revision-Date: YEAR-MO-DA HO:MI+ZONE\n"
"Last-Translator: FULL NAME <EMAIL@ADDRESS>\n"
"Language-Team: LANGUAGE <LL@li.org>\n"
@@ -28,12 +28,12 @@ msgstr ""
#: ../../source/about.rst:8
# 2668bf050934454e95b7906dcb9c3912
-msgid "The XO laptop is an educational tool designed to be put into the hands of every child. By using free and open source software and world-wide software development efforts, OLPC has championed XOs for delivery around the world in multiple languages."
+msgid "The XO laptop is an educational tool designed to be put into the hands of every child. By using free and open source software and world-wide software development efforts. The OLPC project has been delivering XOs around the world, translated into multiple languages."
msgstr ""
#: ../../source/about.rst:14
# 4a4a54a0bfae482aba33c9b11bd5500d
-msgid "The XO runs free and open software, Sugar, which allows anyone to run, copy, distribute, study, change and improve the software. Many people contributing to OLPC believe that these freedoms are critical to fulfilling OLPC's educational goals."
+msgid "The XO runs free and open source software, Sugar, which allows anyone to run, copy, distribute, study, change and improve the software. Many people contributing to OLPC believe that these freedoms are critical to fulfilling OLPC's educational goals."
msgstr ""
#: ../../source/about.rst:16
diff --git a/source/about.rst b/source/about.rst
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--- a/source/about.rst
+++ b/source/about.rst
@@ -5,13 +5,13 @@ About this Manual
Introduction
------------
-The XO laptop is an educational tool designed to be put into the hands of every child. By using free and open source software and world-wide software development efforts, OLPC has championed XOs for delivery around the world in multiple languages.
+The XO laptop is an educational tool designed to be put into the hands of every child. By using free and open source software and world-wide software development efforts. The OLPC project has been delivering XOs around the world, translated into multiple languages.
.. figure:: images/About_This_Manual-Feet_and_smile_1_1.jpg
In a classroom in Peru
-The XO runs free and open software, Sugar, which allows anyone to run, copy, distribute, study, change and improve the software. Many people contributing to OLPC believe that these freedoms are critical to fulfilling OLPC's educational goals.
+The XO runs free and open source software, Sugar, which allows anyone to run, copy, distribute, study, change and improve the software. Many people contributing to OLPC believe that these freedoms are critical to fulfilling OLPC's educational goals.
When you open the XO, you will see the high-resolution, easy-to-read screen that works even in direct sunlight. You can also flip the XO into a book reader mode. The XO is designed to take outdoors and it even survives the rough-and-tumble daily lives that children lead.