From 2ac0dfa8e2d5961437165be1afd61429dd039f3f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Agustin Zubiaga <aguz@sugarlabs.org>
Date: Thu, 10 May 2012 01:12:30 +0000
Subject: Walter Bender suggestions

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diff --git a/illustrate.py b/illustrate.py
index 0e034dd..618f8d2 100644
--- a/illustrate.py
+++ b/illustrate.py
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ class IllustrateActivity(activity.Activity):
         activity_button = ActivityToolbarButton(self)
         open_from_journal_button = ToolButton("open-from-journal")
         open_from_journal_button.connect("clicked", self.load_objectchooser)
-        open_from_journal_button.props.tooltip = _("Load text from Journal")
+        open_from_journal_button.props.tooltip = _("Load text from Sugar Journal")
         open_from_journal_button.show()
         activity_button.page.insert(open_from_journal_button, -1)
         toolbarbox.toolbar.insert(activity_button, 0)
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ class IllustrateActivity(activity.Activity):
         toolbarbox.toolbar.insert(separator, -1)
 
         dialog_btn = ToolButton("dialog-icon")
-        dialog_btn.set_tooltip(_("Show a dialog example"))
+        dialog_btn.set_tooltip(_("Show an example of a dialog"))
         dialog_btn.connect("clicked", self._show_example_dialog)
         toolbarbox.toolbar.insert(dialog_btn, -1)
 
@@ -182,17 +182,17 @@ class IllustrateActivity(activity.Activity):
     def _helpbutton(self, toolbarbox):
         helpbutton = HelpButton()
         helpbutton.add_section(_("A section"))
-        helpbutton.add_paragraph(_("A paragraph, with an icon"), "help-icon")
-        helpbutton.add_paragraph(_("You can add all the paragraphs you want"))
+        helpbutton.add_paragraph(_("A paragraph with an icon"), "help-icon")
+        helpbutton.add_paragraph(_("You can add as many paragraphs you'd like."))
         helpbutton.add_section(
-            _("Why your activity should be well integrated?"))
-        helpbutton.add_paragraph(_("There are a lot of activities for sugar,\
- and if they all work the same way,\
- children who use sugar will feel more comfortable"))
+            _("Why should your activity be well integrated?"))
+        helpbutton.add_paragraph(_("There are many Sugar activities;\
+ if they all work in a similar way,\
+ the children and teachers who use Sugar will be more comfortable."))
         helpbutton.add_section(_("About"))
         helpbutton.add_paragraph(
-            _("This is an activity with sugar integration examples"))
-        helpbutton.add_paragraph(_("Thanks for using!"))
+            _("This Sugar Activity integrates examples."))
+        helpbutton.add_paragraph(_("Thanks for using our activity!"))
 
         toolbarbox.toolbar.insert(helpbutton, -1)
 
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