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| author | Sebastian Dziallas <sebastian@when.com> | 2010-05-22 15:35:48 (GMT) |
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| committer | Sebastian Dziallas <sebastian@when.com> | 2010-05-22 15:35:48 (GMT) |
| commit | 2b632fa7156646e0b7687f453ed4cd495e9afe2f (patch) | |
| tree | 479ecd950262628e917d29761a2ea068bee3e38c | |
| parent | 630c1b796065c99109808c377ee675aa4ede305b (diff) | |
another update for the creation kit
| -rw-r--r-- | Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml | 15 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | Creation Kit/en-US/Revision_History.xml | 14 |
2 files changed, 18 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml b/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml index 0013a75..5d508c1 100644 --- a/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml +++ b/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml @@ -28,7 +28,6 @@ <entry> <simplelist> <member> Windows XP or higher </member> - <member> at least 2 GB of free hard disk space </member> </simplelist> </entry> <entry> <simplelist> <member> older versions may be unsupported </member> </simplelist> </entry> @@ -38,15 +37,11 @@ <entry> <simplelist> <member> Fedora 12 or higher </member> - <member> Ubuntu 8.04 or higher </member> - <member> at least 2 GB of free hard disk space </member> </simplelist> </entry> <entry> <simplelist> - <member> older versions may be unsupported </member> - <member> other distributions may be unsupported </member> - <member> the syslinux isomd5sum cryptsetup packages </member> + <member> other distributions may work </member> </simplelist> </entry> </row> @@ -55,12 +50,10 @@ <entry> <simplelist> <member> Mac OS X 10.6 or higher </member> - <member> at least 2 GB of free hard disk space </member> </simplelist> </entry> <entry> <simplelist> - <member> older versions may be unsupported </member> <member> a python 2.6 installation is required </member> </simplelist> </entry> @@ -156,9 +149,9 @@ </itemizedlist> </section> <section id="sect-Creation_Kit-Preparation-Linux_Instructions-Other"> - <title>Other Distributions</title> + <title>Other Linux Distributions</title> <para> - For a graphical way of putting SoaS on a USB stick, we recommend using <application>UNetbootin</application>. Since version 393, it is able to create Fedora Live USB sticks, the technology Sugar on a Stick is using. Please feel free + For a graphical way of putting SoaS on a USB stick, we recommend using <application>UNetbootin</application>. Since version 393, it is able to create Fedora Live USB sticks, the technology Sugar on a Stick is using. Please feel free to get in touch with us about your experiences. </para> <itemizedlist> <listitem> @@ -198,7 +191,7 @@ <textobject><phrase>Image Writer on Mac</phrase></textobject> </mediaobject> <para> - These instructions are intended for use with Mac OS X. This does, however, not guarantee that the resulting stick will work on a Mac, but possibly only on Linux or Windows machines. Hence, the Mac platform is not officially supported and instead marked as experimental. + These instructions are for creating a stick on Mac OS X. This stick will be usable on Linux and Windows machines, but may not be bootable on Mac machines, so while creating a stick using a Mac is supported, booting a stick on a Mac is not officially supported yet and is still marked as experimental. You will also find further information in the <ulink url="http://wiki.sugarlabs.org/go/Sugar_on_a_Stick/Mac">wiki</ulink>. </para> <note> <title>Note</title> diff --git a/Creation Kit/en-US/Revision_History.xml b/Creation Kit/en-US/Revision_History.xml index bed1138..db66633 100644 --- a/Creation Kit/en-US/Revision_History.xml +++ b/Creation Kit/en-US/Revision_History.xml @@ -6,6 +6,20 @@ <simpara> <revhistory> <revision> + <revnumber>3</revnumber> + <date>Sat May 22 2010</date> + <author> + <firstname>Sebastian</firstname> + <surname>Dziallas</surname> + <email>sdz@sugarlabs.org</email> + </author> + <revdescription> + <simplelist> + <member>Implement further changes suggested by Mel Chua</member> + </simplelist> + </revdescription> + </revision> + <revision> <revnumber>2</revnumber> <date>Sat May 22 2010</date> <author> |