From 2b632fa7156646e0b7687f453ed4cd495e9afe2f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sebastian Dziallas <sebastian@when.com>
Date: Sat, 22 May 2010 15:35:48 +0000
Subject: another update for the creation kit

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diff --git a/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml b/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml
index 0013a75..5d508c1 100644
--- a/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml
+++ b/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml
@@ -28,7 +28,6 @@
                         <entry>
                             <simplelist>
                                 <member> Windows XP or higher </member>
-                                <member> at least 2 GB of free hard disk space </member>
                             </simplelist>
                         </entry>
                         <entry> <simplelist> <member> older versions may be unsupported </member> </simplelist> </entry>
@@ -38,15 +37,11 @@
                         <entry>
                             <simplelist>
                                 <member> Fedora 12 or higher </member>
-                                <member> Ubuntu 8.04 or higher </member>
-                                <member> at least 2 GB of free hard disk space </member>
                             </simplelist>
                         </entry>
                         <entry>
                             <simplelist>
-                                <member> older versions may be unsupported </member>
-                                <member> other distributions may be unsupported </member>
-                                <member> the syslinux isomd5sum cryptsetup packages </member>
+                                <member> other distributions may work </member>
                             </simplelist>
                         </entry>
                     </row>
@@ -55,12 +50,10 @@
                         <entry>
                             <simplelist>
                                 <member> Mac OS X 10.6 or higher </member>
-                                <member> at least 2 GB of free hard disk space </member>
                             </simplelist>
                         </entry>
                         <entry>
                             <simplelist>
-                                <member> older versions may be unsupported </member>
                                 <member> a python 2.6 installation is required </member>
                             </simplelist>
                         </entry>
@@ -156,9 +149,9 @@
         </itemizedlist>
     </section>
     <section id="sect-Creation_Kit-Preparation-Linux_Instructions-Other">
-    <title>Other Distributions</title>
+    <title>Other Linux Distributions</title>
     <para>
-        For a graphical way of putting SoaS on a USB stick, we recommend using <application>UNetbootin</application>. Since version 393, it is able to create Fedora Live USB sticks, the technology Sugar on a Stick is using. Please feel free
+        For a graphical way of putting SoaS on a USB stick, we recommend using <application>UNetbootin</application>. Since version 393, it is able to create Fedora Live USB sticks, the technology Sugar on a Stick is using. Please feel free to get in touch with us about your experiences.
     </para>
 	<itemizedlist>
 		<listitem>
@@ -198,7 +191,7 @@
         <textobject><phrase>Image Writer on Mac</phrase></textobject>
         </mediaobject>
         <para>
-            These instructions are intended for use with Mac OS X. This does, however, not guarantee that the resulting stick will work on a Mac, but possibly only on Linux or Windows machines. Hence, the Mac platform is not officially supported and instead marked as experimental.
+		These instructions are for creating a stick on Mac OS X. This stick will be usable on Linux and Windows machines, but may not be bootable on Mac machines, so while creating a stick using a Mac is supported, booting a stick on a Mac is not officially supported yet and is still marked as experimental. You will also find further information in the <ulink url="http://wiki.sugarlabs.org/go/Sugar_on_a_Stick/Mac">wiki</ulink>.
         </para>
         <note>
             <title>Note</title>
diff --git a/Creation Kit/en-US/Revision_History.xml b/Creation Kit/en-US/Revision_History.xml
index bed1138..db66633 100644
--- a/Creation Kit/en-US/Revision_History.xml
+++ b/Creation Kit/en-US/Revision_History.xml
@@ -6,6 +6,20 @@
 	<simpara>
 		<revhistory>
 			<revision>
+				<revnumber>3</revnumber>
+				<date>Sat May 22 2010</date>
+				<author>
+					<firstname>Sebastian</firstname>
+					<surname>Dziallas</surname>
+					<email>sdz@sugarlabs.org</email>
+				</author>
+				<revdescription>
+					<simplelist>
+						<member>Implement further changes suggested by Mel Chua</member>
+					</simplelist>
+				</revdescription>
+			</revision>
+			<revision>
 				<revnumber>2</revnumber>
 				<date>Sat May 22 2010</date>
 				<author>
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