Clytie Siddall gave us a complete string review.

	This commit is the intergration of her work.

1 files changed, 2 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/boards/clockgame.xml.in b/boards/clockgame.xml.in
index 04c36a5..7beffd6 100644
--- a/boards/clockgame.xml.in
+++ b/boards/clockgame.xml.in
@@ -11,9 +11,7 @@
 	 <_title>Learning Clock</_title>
 	 <_description>Learn how to tell the time</_description>
 	<_prerequisite>The concept of time. Reading the time.</_prerequisite>
-	<_goal>Distinguish between hours, minutes and seconds.
-Display time on a clock.</_goal>
-	<_manual>Click on the arrows to match the clock time with the time in numbers (hours:minutes or 
-hours:minutes:seconds). You can change the direction of an arrow by selecting it and moving the mouse.</_manual>
+	<_goal>Distinguish between time-units (hour, minute and second). Set and display time on a clock.</_goal>
+	<_manual>Set the clock to the time given, in the time-units shown (hours:minutes or hours:minutes:seconds). Click on the different arrows, and move the mouse, to make the numbers go up or down.</_manual>
   </Board>
 </GCompris>