Clytie Siddall gave us a complete string review.

	This commit is the intergration of her work.

1 files changed, 2 insertions, 17 deletions

diff --git a/boards/searace1player.xml.in b/boards/searace1player.xml.in
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--- a/boards/searace1player.xml.in
+++ b/boards/searace1player.xml.in
@@ -13,22 +13,7 @@
 	 <_description>Give good instructions to your ship in order to be first
 in the race.</_description>
 	<_prerequisite></_prerequisite>
-	<_goal>In this activity, you will learn how to enter commands to a computer.
-Even if the language is extremely basic, you learn here how to think ahead and enter a program.
-This activity can be used to introduce the programming concept to kids.</_goal>
-	<_manual>In the text entry, enter line by line commands to give direction to your boat.
-Commands supported are displayed between the two entry area.
-The 'left' and 'right' commands must be suffixed by an angle in degree. The angle value is also
-called a 'parameter' to the left or right command. By default 45 degree is used.
-The 'forward' command accept a distance parameter. By default 1 is used.
-For example:
-left 90    => Make a perpendicular left turn
-forward 10 => Go forward for 10 units (as displayed in the ruler)
-The goal is to reach the right of the screen (the red line).
-When done, you can try to improve your program and start a new race with the same weather
- conditions by using the retry button.
-You can click and drag your mouse anywhere on the map to get a measurement in distance
-and angle.
-Going to the next level will give your more complex weather conditions.</_manual>
+	<_goal>In this activity, you will learn how to enter commands into a computer. Even if the language is extremely basic, you learn here how to think ahead and construct a program. This activity can be used to introduce the programming concept to children.</_goal>
+	<_manual>In the text entry, enter one command per line, to control your boat. Commands supported are displayed between the two entry areas. The 'left' and 'right' commands must be followed by an angle in degrees. The angle value is also called a 'parameter' to the left or right command. By default 45 degrees is used. The 'forward' command accepts a distance parameter. By default 1 is used. For example: left 90 => Make a perpendicular left turn forward 10 => Go forward for 10 units (as displayed on the ruler). The goal is to reach the right of the screen (the red line). When done, you can try to improve your program and start a new race with the same weather conditions by using the retry button. You can click and drag your mouse anywhere on the map to get a measurement in distance and angle. Going to the next level will give you more complex weather conditions.</_manual>
   </Board>
 </GCompris>