increment version number and adjust mac settings

5 files changed, 32 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/Creation Kit/en-US/Book_Info.xml b/Creation Kit/en-US/Book_Info.xml
index 34e33a4..b433e61 100644
--- a/Creation Kit/en-US/Book_Info.xml
+++ b/Creation Kit/en-US/Book_Info.xml
@@ -5,9 +5,9 @@
 	<title>Creation Kit</title>
 	<subtitle>A simple guide on how to create SoaS</subtitle>
 	<productname>Sugar on a Stick</productname>
-	<productnumber>0.1</productnumber>
+	<productnumber>3</productnumber>
 	<edition>1</edition>
-	<pubsnumber>0</pubsnumber>
+	<pubsnumber>2</pubsnumber>
 	<abstract>
 		<para>
 This guide describes how to prepare and create Sugar on a Stick
diff --git a/Creation Kit/en-US/Book_Info.xml~ b/Creation Kit/en-US/Book_Info.xml~
index 34e33a4..18c9de2 100644
--- a/Creation Kit/en-US/Book_Info.xml~
+++ b/Creation Kit/en-US/Book_Info.xml~
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 	<title>Creation Kit</title>
 	<subtitle>A simple guide on how to create SoaS</subtitle>
 	<productname>Sugar on a Stick</productname>
-	<productnumber>0.1</productnumber>
+	<productnumber>3</productnumber>
 	<edition>1</edition>
 	<pubsnumber>0</pubsnumber>
 	<abstract>
diff --git a/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml b/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml
index 7c8861b..2333a20 100644
--- a/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml
+++ b/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml
@@ -54,11 +54,16 @@
 						<entry> <simplelist> <member>  Mac </member> </simplelist> </entry>
 						<entry>
 							<simplelist>
-								<member> Mac OS X 10.4 or higher </member>
+								<member> Mac OS X 10.6 or higher </member>
 								<member> at least 2 GB of free hard disk space </member>
 							</simplelist>
 						</entry>
-						<entry> <simplelist> <member> older versions may be unsupported </member> </simplelist> </entry>
+						<entry>
+							<simplelist>
+								<member> older versions may be unsupported </member>
+								<member> a python 2.6 installation is required </member>
+							</simplelist>
+						</entry>
 					</row>
 				</tbody>
 			</tgroup>
@@ -183,6 +188,12 @@
 					<para>
 						Additionally, you can also increase or decrease the overlay size for storing your data. Keep in mind that executing the command twice will remove the old overlay, and thus your stored files.
 					</para>
+					<note>
+						<title>Note</title>
+						<para>
+							You might also want to add the <command>--efi</command> or <command>--xo</command> parameters, depending on later use. The former one is a requirement for booting the stick on a limited number of Macs, the latter one for booting it on OLPC's XO-1.
+						</para>
+					</note>
 				</blockquote>
 			</listitem>
 		</itemizedlist>
@@ -196,7 +207,7 @@
 		<textobject><phrase>Image Writer on Mac</phrase></textobject>
 		</mediaobject>
 		<para>
-			These instructions are intended for use with Mac OS X. Older versions such as 10.4 are supposed to work with the installation script, too. Whereas it is possible to prepare Sugar on a Stick on a Mac, it is not guaranteed that the final stick will work on the same Mac. A definite requirement is the use of a Mac with Intel processor.
+			These instructions are intended for use with Mac OS X. Whereas it is possible to prepare Sugar on a Stick on a Mac, the stick will with some certainty only work on normal machines. A definite requirement is the use of a Mac with Intel processor.
 		</para>
 		<note>
 			<title>Note</title>
diff --git a/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml~ b/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml~
index fad408d..e57bf8f 100644
--- a/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml~
+++ b/Creation Kit/en-US/Chapter.xml~
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
 							<simplelist>
 								<member> older versions may be unsupported </member>
 								<member> other distributions may be unsupported </member>
-								<member> the syslinux isomd5sum cryptsetup packages are required</member>
+								<member> the syslinux isomd5sum cryptsetup packages </member>
 							</simplelist>
 						</entry>
 					</row>
@@ -54,11 +54,16 @@
 						<entry> <simplelist> <member>  Mac </member> </simplelist> </entry>
 						<entry>
 							<simplelist>
-								<member> Mac OS X 10.4 or higher </member>
+								<member> Mac OS X 10.6 or higher </member>
 								<member> at least 2 GB of free hard disk space </member>
 							</simplelist>
 						</entry>
-						<entry> <simplelist> <member> older versions may be unsupported </member> </simplelist> </entry>
+						<entry>
+							<simplelist>
+								<member> older versions may be unsupported </member>
+								<member> a python 2.6 installation is required </member
+							</simplelist>
+						</entry>
 					</row>
 				</tbody>
 			</tgroup>
@@ -183,6 +188,12 @@
 					<para>
 						Additionally, you can also increase or decrease the overlay size for storing your data. Keep in mind that executing the command twice will remove the old overlay, and thus your stored files.
 					</para>
+					<note>
+						<title>Note</title>
+						<para>
+							You might also want to add the <command>--efi</command> or <command>--xo</command> parameters, depending on later use. The former one is a requirement for booting the stick on a limited number of Macs, the latter one for booting it on OLPC's XO-1.
+						</para>
+					</note>
 				</blockquote>
 			</listitem>
 		</itemizedlist>
@@ -196,7 +207,7 @@
 		<textobject><phrase>Image Writer on Mac</phrase></textobject>
 		</mediaobject>
 		<para>
-			These instructions are intended for use with Mac OS X. Older versions such as 10.4 are supposed to work with the installation script, too. Whereas it is possible to prepare Sugar on a Stick on a Mac, it is not guaranteed that the final stick will work on the same Mac. A definite requirement is the use of a Mac with Intel processor.
+			These instructions are intended for use with Mac OS X. Whereas it is possible to prepare Sugar on a Stick on a Mac, the stick will with some certainty only work on normal machines. A definite requirement is the use of a Mac with Intel processor.
 		</para>
 		<note>
 			<title>Note</title>
diff --git a/Creation Kit/en-US/Creation_Kit.xml b/Creation Kit/en-US/Creation_Kit.xml
index 2934007..fb03d45 100644
--- a/Creation Kit/en-US/Creation_Kit.xml
+++ b/Creation Kit/en-US/Creation_Kit.xml
@@ -6,6 +6,5 @@
 	<xi:include href="Preface.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	<xi:include href="Chapter.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
 	<xi:include href="Revision_History.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
-	<index />
 </book>